April 15, 2008
It’s still Monday here, so I’m turning in my read. write. poem. prompt under the wire.
For the Voiceless
“In Darfur, arms are like sticks. They are everywhere. You just need to bend down and pick one up.”
- IBRAHIM HASSAN, a Chadian rebel based in the Darfur region of Sudan. NY Times, April 2008
They still surround you, never making a sound. Hundreds
of silent memories trail you. Bend down. Pick them up.
He says arms litter their landscape, spare limbs found lying
everywhere. If you want one, just bend down, pick it up.
Dandelions litter your lawn. Strong weeds sown each spring
by silent insistent spores. You bend down, pick them up.
Language is our choice, a luxury found only in
sentients. We collect words, bend down to pick them up.
Number 4001 made a hard choice, wound himself
around a bomb to save his friends. Bent down, picked it up.
I prefer animals, their soundless love, to our world’s
angry iterations. I bend down to pick them up.
April 15, 2008 at 8:14 am
Chilling opening image, evokes horrible scenes. I like the way you use repitition in the poem
April 15, 2008 at 9:52 am
Perfectly said. The horror, but also the matter-of-factness of it all.
April 15, 2008 at 11:26 am
My blood got cold after reading this! I would say..damn good!
ignomorous ignominy
April 15, 2008 at 3:05 pm
Beautifully written. I agree about the repetition–it adds to the power of this piece simply by saying it again, but also because in very simple, common, spoken every day language language (”pick up your clothes”, pick-up sticks)contains in this piece a horror of images which is Darfur’s everyday life. And, because someone, somewhere is going to have to go in and pick up the pieces–literally. Beautiful. AnnieH
April 15, 2008 at 5:43 pm
Great poem, full of heart. The trauma some souls witness….
I actually have to pick up my dachshund now to take him outside-he’s going blind.
I agree with what Crafty said about your repetions, how they create a chant, a lament.
April 15, 2008 at 7:18 pm
this was absolutely stunning.
April 16, 2008 at 1:01 pm
A very moving piece today… it’s so hard to think of man’s cruelty yet it’s so pervasive… and Africa seems to be on the forefront of this.
Well done indeed.
April 17, 2008 at 2:32 am
wow. amazing piece.
April 20, 2008 at 8:53 pm
That’s an astounding quote to use in the poem, and the repetition really works here.
Well done!
May 16, 2008 at 12:09 pm
I really like this Jessica, it makes a powerful statement.