April 7, 2008
For read. write. poem. this week, the prompt was “aunts.” When I spoke with my mom this week, she told me that my great aunt Crystal turns 98 this week, so she was going to visit her. I probably haven’t seen her in 10 years or so, but I immediately flashed on the memory below.
Visiting Crystal
She had the husband with the cauliflowered ear,
and an ash brown buzz cut, tight
around his lumpy, curled flesh. She wore thick
high heels, tight polyester slacks, and turquoise
eye shadow layered over crepe paper lids.
She always gave me Jean Nate for Christmas
powder and parfum, exotic to an eight year old. I hugged
around her neck, her red curls brushed across my cheek.
The one time I visited her cramped house in Berkley,
Mom dropped me off early. I wandered, peered
at photographs from the ‘40’s, pushed open doors
and peered inside. On an oak dresser, a faceless
plastic head was smothered by flame
red curls. Crystal was half dressed
and her white camisole matched the sparse white strands
haloed around her head. She smiled, red lips
stretched broadly, covered her fragile skull
and asked, “Well kid, what are we doing today?”
April 7, 2008 at 2:33 pm
Very nice memory poem of your aunt Crystal. It is interesting how a memory can be so vivid at times and lead right into a poem. Have a great day.
April 7, 2008 at 3:44 pm
Jessica, I really laughed at this, and to be honest, poems don’t usually make me laugh. Mere chuckles. This one had me smiling so wide!
What a memory. And your descriptions all the way through are specific,using all the senses and bringing me right there. Love it!
April 7, 2008 at 4:24 pm
Very detailed picture of your aunt! Love it!
wicked witch
April 7, 2008 at 5:56 pm
This is so rich in details! I was right with you as you roamed around!
April 7, 2008 at 6:09 pm
Oh, this was wonderful… such a memory! I love the last line… it could have been very different with some aunts!
Well done!
April 7, 2008 at 11:44 pm
oh this was lovely… both the memory and the visual!!!!! i think i might have been scared by that!!!!
April 8, 2008 at 1:58 am
I remember Jean Nate! I loved this poem– quite a character your aunt was! I really am loving this prompt. Thanks for sharing such a sweet memory!
April 8, 2008 at 2:01 am
That’s just awesome. I love it.
April 8, 2008 at 3:54 am
Wow! And it starts with the name, unusual I thought for a lady her age. And the cauliflower eared husband. Wonderful imagery, rich and sweet-tart. Loved her last line too. Powerful way to end, on a quote.
(I remember Jean Nate, too!)
April 8, 2008 at 6:29 am
i could really see this poem–the cauliflower ear, the red hair, the broad red smile, the sparse white curls–the memory comes alive!
April 8, 2008 at 11:51 am
this was so rich with image…

i loved it…
so many details…